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Cream's Big Adventure - Page 12 by Zack113 Cream's Big Adventure - Page 12 by Zack113
Chapter 1 is finally over. Man, it took too long. Hopefully I'll be back on track to work on chapter 2 and on.
(Also, Sonic X artstyle in the last panel. I actually suck at drawing Tails, so I borrowed a Sonic X pic from Sonic wiki and adjusted it to fit in. Hope it doesn't seem too out of place.)
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CyberFox Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2017   Artist
no continuation? really?
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SuperdarksideX5 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
I'm looking foward to this. :) 
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CartoonWatcher1234 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2017
Welp, and so it begins. Gotta say, from a writer standpoint, still not exactly a big fan of the name your fan came up with, "The Growinator," sounds like something that Dr. Doofenshmirtz invented, with the inator suffix constantly at the end of everything.

But then again, considering your fan actually managed to make a LEGIT STORY out of this theme and not just make it completely boring with only one thing happening the whole time, I suppose I have to give the writer credit where it's due. So, props to you writer, wherever you may be lurking.

As for you Zack, nice work as usual, the art is smooth, and the attention to detail (even with your slight cheat with Tails on the last panel) is impressive. You even went out of your way to make sure the clock on the wall had a few seconds tick by after each individual statement, that's something a lot of artists don't bother with, so nice work there. The only thing that I PERSONALLY would bring up from a character standpoint is that I would try to avoid having Cream using "Mr." when talking specifically to Tails, since the writer wrote the story that Tails and Cream get together in it. I don't know if maybe it's different in China (if it is please tell me so I know), but people don't generally use a title when referring to their significant other. If Cream is going to be Tails' girlfriend, it's kinda strange for her to use "Mr." when talking to him. That's just my personal opinion on the matter.
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Hereward Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2018
Funny you should say that. There's already a P&F fanwork that uses that name.
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Zack113 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Fun fact: even I myself didn't notice the clock when I picked up where I left off yesterday.
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CartoonWatcher1234 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2017
Somehow I find it amusing when artists manage to catch themselves off guard, really brings credence to the claim that sometimes comics draw themselves.
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Zack113 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
You know what, I've already got the Growinator name and the “Mr.” stuff covered in my further plans. Thanks for reminding me, though. Gotta pull'em out fast, or else other readers might bring up the issue again later.
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CartoonWatcher1234 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2017
You came up with a better name? Now this I'm interested in seeing lol.
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thomasharrisonfoxtf Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2017
....let me guess. Cream becomes a giant.
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Zack113 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, yeah. What'd ya expect?
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